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All it would take by ~Coontail:iconCoontail:



One look.
Thats all it would take for my world to come together
All it would take for the grass on my side to become greener.
Thats all it would take for the clouds to be erased from the clear, blue sky
One smile.
Thats all it would take for my worries to dissolve.
All it would take for my spirits to soar to the heavens in back
Thats all it would take for me to become your knight in shining armor.
One Frown.
Thats all it would take for me to walk the fires of hell, so you may see the pearly gates
All it would take for me to place my life on the line, so that yours may be better
Thats all it would take for me to pledge to find a way to bring that smile back
One Tear.
Thats all it would take for me to walk the bond that hold us together, to wrap my arms about you
All it would take for my world to shatter
Thats all it would take....

I would lasso and cage the sun, for when you was cold, and the moon for when you needed its pale glow
I would move the mountains, channel the oceans and rivers, and reshape the Earth itself
I would wrestle the Hurricanes, fight with the Tornadoes, and outstep the quakes.

If it pleased you...thats all it would take.
©2008 ~Coontail
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Megan
Princess
Love..

Even as I sat here, the pale face of the moon lighting the darkness with its ever apparently glow, many a things come to mind when I go to type this for a contest. Moonbeams, and heartstrings...the Theme of this written piece.It seemed fitting not to write about one of my characters, but of where the true heartstrings lie.They reach across state lines, and still hold strong to today. We've been together for, going on 2 years this Thanksgiving. She's the love of my life, one of the only people I would give my life to save/protect. I, myself, would even go to hell and serve her time (if she has any) as well as my own just so she would go to heaven, if the good lord would allow. She will be Turning 21 in May, as well as getting out of college this Semester May 8th. Leaning towards nursing school. I hope she makes it. She, living in Kentucky, and myself in Tennessee, makes us close, but far away at the same time.The computer, and a handful of phone calls are all that keep us connected, until we'ra able to meet each other. Having $200 from Graduation money, I plan to keep saving, So that I can see her smiling face for real, instead of pictures. So, this it for you, love

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~Enskie:iconEnskie: May 11, 2008, 10:48:12 PM
Firstly, points for an original layout that I have never seen before, that's not an instant vote I might add and nor is it my final judgment but it is very well written and set out.

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~Coontail:iconCoontail: 6 days 15 hours ago
*bows. MAny thanks. Ive saw, and also been told I've made a few grammar errors and whatnot in there. Though, my computer does not have spell check or anything, so..yeah.
However, I thank you for the compliment.

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~DefaultGrl13:iconDefaultGrl13: 5 days 13 hours ago
I love this piece! Looking at all these awesome entries makes me feel like my stuff is really bad...

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~Coontail:iconCoontail: 4 days 14 hours ago
Many thanks *bows ow. Though, Bah! Id imagine your stuff is purely awesome

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Live for the Pack, and the pack lives for you. Venti Nordici
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~DefaultGrl13:iconDefaultGrl13: 4 days 2 hours ago
It's not. It really is not. I love my characters, but when I write about them, it comes out kinda sloppy.

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~Coontail:iconCoontail: 3 days 16 hours ago
Bah, I honestly doubt that. Just write what your heart tells ya. *shrugs. I dont have spell check or anything, so what I type first is my rought and final piece.

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Live for the Pack, and the pack lives for you. Venti Nordici
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~DefaultGrl13:iconDefaultGrl13: 3 days 11 hours ago
:) Who (what?) are the three? the word's in your siggy, and it's perplexing...

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~Coontail:iconCoontail: 1 day 15 hours ago
The three, are three people in my life that Id give my life for.

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Live for the 3. Die for the 3

Live for the Pack, and the pack lives for you. Venti Nordici
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~DefaultGrl13:iconDefaultGrl13: 1 hour 54 minutes ago
Oh... I get it now! Than you for clearing that up! :D

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